UPDATE 9-
"aarti ishwar tumhi meri bhi umar lga de , tum hazar sal jiyo, aur har pal khusiyo ke saye me gujare.aaj tumhara b,day hai aur aaj mai tumhare pas nhi hu ,sorry yar tumhe to sab pata hi h ,mai apne mains ke exam me uljha hua hu....,bas ek bar IAS ban jau fir kabhi tumhe akela nhi chhodunga. tumhare liye ek chhota sa gift h,,mujhe pata h tumhe bahut pasand aayeg. chalo khusi khusi apna bday manao and plz don,t miss me much. love u."
aur aarti ke hath me aa jata h wo chhota sa locket. locket heart ke shape ka tha jo do hisso me khul jata ..uske ek taraf sahil ki tasweer lagi thi aur dusri taraf aarti ki
aarti ko sahil par tutkr pyar aata hai, : kitna pyar karte the tum mujhe sahil, shayad jitna is duniya me kisi ne kisi se na kiya hoga,,aur maine badle me tumhe kya diya ..sirf dard ,aansu aur tanhai,,,4 sl ..4 sal maine tumse bat nhi ki aur tumne kabhi vajah nhi puchhi,bahut jyadati ki h maine tumhare sath, lekin ab nahi .....m sab thik kar dungi jan ,,ab mujhe kisi ka dar nhi h ..na parivar ka na samaj ka
"
ek dridh nishay chamak raha tha aarti ki aankho me .
subah sahil ki aankhe thodi der se khulti h ..wo room se bahar aata h to rahul joging se aata dikhai deta h...RAHUL " kaise h SDM sahb "
"abe q subah subah khich raha h ,,aa baith"
dono lawn me lagi chairs par baith jate h. itne bade officer ban jane k bad bhi aaj bhi dono ki dosti me koi formality nhi aayi thi , jan chhidakte thedono ek dusre par .
"achchha ye bata yeladki aur sadi ka kya chakkar h , abe mai jara apni duty me busy o gya aur tune itna kuchh kar diya.achchha kaun h jisne hamre yar ka dil loota ,kab milwa raha h.."
thoda gambhir ho gaya rahul ka chehra;
"wo sab chhod tu sb kuchh bhool kar ja aur aarti ke sath apni trip" enjoy" kar , wapas aane par sab bata dunga"- enjoy par jyada jor diya rahul ne .sahil ne mahsoos to kiya par ignore kar gaya.
"achchha beta ab hamse bhi bate chhupayi ja rhi h ..dekh le anjam bura hoga"
sahil ne pyar bhari dhamki di.
"nhi yar , tere siwa h hi kaun mera , bas tu wapas aaja ek dam fit and fine hokar fir dher sari bate karni h tujhse.. achha sun ek bat puchhu?"
nhi pahle apni bata ...achchha chal puchh "
jab tu accident ke bad ambulance me tha to tune kaha yar mai jeena nhi chahta ..aur dusri bar jab hosh me aata h to bolta h mujhe bacha le na yar..aisa kya badla gaya tha un teen dino me jabki tu pure time behosh tha " rahul use gahri najaro se dekhte huye puchhta h
"uske aansu" anayas hi sahil ke honto se nikal jata h
saahil chaunk jata h ye kya bol idya usne , par rahul ke chehre par aascharya ke koi bhav nhi thi , bas thi to ek gahri muskurahat.
"mera matlab tha sabke aansu, sabka dard aur sabka payar dekhkar mai emotional ho gya " sahl ne puri kosis ki bat sambhalane ki lekin rahul bhi police officer tha ,sabkuchh jan to wo pahle hi chuka tha bas sahil se kabool karwana chah raha tha . sahil ko gol mol sa jawab dete dekhkar usne abhi use aur kuredna thik nhi samjha
'chal teri flight ka time ho rha h,fata fat taiyar ho ja "
"ok,,aaja andar chalte hai "
Rahul sahil aur aarti ko chhodane airport aaya hota h,ghar ke baki log chahte to the aana par sahil sabko mana kar deta h ,par rahul aata hi h.
"hello sahil m aapse milne aa rhi hu par train late h..plz aap thodi der aur ru jao na " sahil ki bahen renu ka call tha
"
renu 15 min bad meri flight hi ,,tu tension mat le m ab bilkul thi ku ,tu aram se ghar ja mai kuchh dino me waoas aa jaunga"
"mai sabse bahut naraj hu , kya m ghar ka hissa nhi hu,,mujhe kuchh q nhi bataya gaya, jab se mujhe pata chala h ,, tumse milne ko dil tadap gaya h"
"aree yar aisa kuchh nhi h,,tu to sabki ladli h aur mujhe kuchh nhi hoga ....achhcha ab m phon rakhta hu ,,tu sabka khyal rakhna .chal bye "
"ok sahil tu bhi apna khyal rakhna , pahuch kar phone karna , ok ..bye "
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UPDATE 10-
"sahil sun , use jayda tang mat karna "
"kyaaaaaaaaa?????? '" vismay se sahil ki aankhe fail gayi.
"abe kuchh nhi majak kar raha tha , chal thik h fir, take care " dono gale milte h ,rahul aarti ko bye bolta h.sahil aarti ke sath andar ki or chal deta h.
sahil pichhe mudlar dekhta h to rahul abhi bhi wahi khada tha ..wo haskar hath hila deta h. rhul bhi hath hilata h aur tab tak dekhta rahta ha jab tak dono uski ankho se ojhal nhi ho jate.
"ja mere dost bhagwan tere hisse me duniya ki har khusi de ..jitni khusiya tune bati h uski dugni khusi tujhe mile. hey ishwar! agr ab bhi sahil ki zindagi me tune khusiyo ke phool na khilaye to bharosa toot jayega mera tere par se . 5 salo ka ye banwas akele bitaya h usne ..bina koi shikwa kiye .. . hamesa chehre par khusi saja kar dusro ki takleefe door karne wale is insan ke dil me kitna dard h ,mai janta hu..bas ab iske aajmaisho ke din khatam kar de . iski fiza ke dino ko bahar ke dino me badal de "
Rahul dil hi dil me lakho duaye deta h us insan ko jiska makam sabse uncha tha uske jeevan me .
Aarti aur sahil aaj barso bad sath sath chal rahe the .aarti chor najro se sahil ki taraf dekhti h..kitna badal gaya tha wo ab.. sharir se kaisa gathila aur majboot lagne laga tha ..chauda seena , majboot bahe ,aur chamkata hua mastak......lekin chehre par faili mano sadiyo purani udasi...kaisa shokh hua karta tha wo ,,aarti ko dekhte hi uske chehre ka rang badl jata tha ..lekin ab ..rang to ab bhi badal jata tha bas fark itna tha -- pahle wo chehra khil jata tha use dekhkar , ab wo chera bujh jata tha .
"
sahil mai fir tumhe jeet lungi jan, "
aarti mano khud se hi vada karti hu.
"sahil sun , use jayda tang mat karna "
"kyaaaaaaaaa?????? '" vismay se sahil ki aankhe fail gayi.
"abe kuchh nhi majak kar raha tha , chal thik h fir, take care " dono gale milte h ,rahul aarti ko bye bolta h.sahil aarti ke sath andar ki or chal deta h.
sahil pichhe mudlar dekhta h to rahul abhi bhi wahi khada tha ..wo haskar hath hila deta h. rhul bhi hath hilata h aur tab tak dekhta rahta ha jab tak dono uski ankho se ojhal nhi ho jate.
"ja mere dost bhagwan tere hisse me duniya ki har khusi de ..jitni khusiya tune bati h uski dugni khusi tujhe mile. hey ishwar! agr ab bhi sahil ki zindagi me tune khusiyo ke phool na khilaye to bharosa toot jayega mera tere par se . 5 salo ka ye banwas akele bitaya h usne ..bina koi shikwa kiye .. . hamesa chehre par khusi saja kar dusro ki takleefe door karne wale is insan ke dil me kitna dard h ,mai janta hu..bas ab iske aajmaisho ke din khatam kar de . iski fiza ke dino ko bahar ke dino me badal de "
Rahul dil hi dil me lakho duaye deta h us insan ko jiska makam sabse uncha tha uske jeevan me .
Aarti aur sahil aaj barso bad sath sath chal rahe the .aarti chor najro se sahil ki taraf dekhti h..kitna badal gaya tha wo ab.. sharir se kaisa gathila aur majboot lagne laga tha ..chauda seena , majboot bahe ,aur chamkata hua mastak......lekin chehre par faili mano sadiyo purani udasi...kaisa shokh hua karta tha wo ,,aarti ko dekhte hi uske chehre ka rang badl jata tha ..lekin ab ..rang to ab bhi badal jata tha bas fark itna tha -- pahle wo chehra khil jata tha use dekhkar , ab wo chera bujh jata tha .
"
sahil mai fir tumhe jeet lungi jan, "
aarti mano khud se hi vada karti hu.
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UPDATE 12-
Jeevanvatika kafi bada bana hua tha . thodi thodi door par bunglow jaise kintu unse chhote ghar bane the aur har 4_5 gharo ke madhya ek bagicha. agr koi ek ghar me rahe to dusre ghar wale se koi matllab bilkul nhi h.
yeh is bat ka dhyan rakhkar banaya gya tha ki jo bhi yha rahe uska kisi dusre se kisi tarah se disturb na ho. generally log apni family ke kisi memebr ke sath hi aate the aur agar aavshyakata hoti to r bhi mil sakte the .
aarti apne college ki sabse achchhi student rahi thi , aur uske colege ke dwara hi yeh chalaya jata tha .. to yha par aarti ki bahut achchhi jan pahchan thi.
room tak pahuchate pahuchate sham ke 5 baj gaye the .sardiyo ka musam hone ke karan andhera ghir aaya tha .
aarti ne jo "ghar" liya tha wo kafi kinare bana hua tha ..second floor par unka sara set up tha . jeevan vatika ki location is tarah ki thi ki aane wala har insan khud ko nature ke bahut karib mehsus karta ...
sahil thik to ho gaya tha lekin abhi bhi kafi kamjori thi .aarti aur sahil ke bich abhi ek deewar thi .dono ek dusre se vaise bilkul bat nhi kar paa rahe the jaise barso pahle karte the - jab wo do jism ek jan hua karte the .
aarti janti thi is deewar ko use hi girana h ..aakhir ye deewar banai bhi to uske hi berukhi ne thi.
sahil washroom se fresh hokar nikla tha jab uski nazar sofe par aadhi leti si aarti par padti h . aarti bahut thak gayi thi aur uski aankh lag gayi thi. aarti ne woolen suit pahena hua tha jiske upar se sweater aur fir overcoat ..ek shawl uske kandhe se jhul rahi thi . gulabi patle hoth , ghani palke ,kali ,lambi ghani julfe jiska kuchh ansh uske choti se nikal kar galo ko choom raha tha... surahidar gardan aur unke niche wo everest ki do chotiya ...uff kisi ka bhi iman dol jaye is pari ko dekhkar.
"huh ..aaj bhi utni hi masoomiyat h is chehre par ..uff ye masoom chehre" sahil ke dil me ek tees si ubharti hai.
"didi chai laya hu"
kishor ki aavaz par aarti hadbada kar uth jati h aur sahil ko khud ko dekhte pakr halka sa muskura deti h...sahil jaise chori karte pakda gya ho is tarah se nazre jhuka leta h .
aarti darvaza kholti h...
" kishor kuchh khane ko nhi laye ho ,,bahut bhookh lagi h par m bolna bhool gayi "
"laya hu didi, mujhe laga hi tha aap log bhukhe honge "
aur ye kahkar wo puri trolly andar kar deta h jis par dher sari cheeje khane ki rakhi thi .
"thank u kishore "
kishore bas muskura kar rah jaata h aur bahar nikal jata h .
aarti chai bana kar sahil ki or badha deti h aur kuchh snakes bhi .sahil chup chap cup pakad leta h .
thank you"" sahil ke muh se nikal jata h .
"ab itni parayi ho gyi hu m"
" m jhuthe sapne nahi dekhta ..sachchai ka samna karna sikh liya h maine "
sahil itna bolkar wha se uthkar jane lagta h ..aarti uska hath pakad leti h .
"plz jao mat m kuchh nhi bolungi agar tum nahi chate to "
sahil tumne sach ka samna abhi kiya hi kaha h ..wo to maine kiya h jan - aarti apne man me sochati h aur aansu ki do boonde uske galo ko bhigo deti h jinhe wo badi safai se chhupa leti h .
Jeevanvatika kafi bada bana hua tha . thodi thodi door par bunglow jaise kintu unse chhote ghar bane the aur har 4_5 gharo ke madhya ek bagicha. agr koi ek ghar me rahe to dusre ghar wale se koi matllab bilkul nhi h.
yeh is bat ka dhyan rakhkar banaya gya tha ki jo bhi yha rahe uska kisi dusre se kisi tarah se disturb na ho. generally log apni family ke kisi memebr ke sath hi aate the aur agar aavshyakata hoti to r bhi mil sakte the .
aarti apne college ki sabse achchhi student rahi thi , aur uske colege ke dwara hi yeh chalaya jata tha .. to yha par aarti ki bahut achchhi jan pahchan thi.
room tak pahuchate pahuchate sham ke 5 baj gaye the .sardiyo ka musam hone ke karan andhera ghir aaya tha .
aarti ne jo "ghar" liya tha wo kafi kinare bana hua tha ..second floor par unka sara set up tha . jeevan vatika ki location is tarah ki thi ki aane wala har insan khud ko nature ke bahut karib mehsus karta ...
sahil thik to ho gaya tha lekin abhi bhi kafi kamjori thi .aarti aur sahil ke bich abhi ek deewar thi .dono ek dusre se vaise bilkul bat nhi kar paa rahe the jaise barso pahle karte the - jab wo do jism ek jan hua karte the .
aarti janti thi is deewar ko use hi girana h ..aakhir ye deewar banai bhi to uske hi berukhi ne thi.
sahil washroom se fresh hokar nikla tha jab uski nazar sofe par aadhi leti si aarti par padti h . aarti bahut thak gayi thi aur uski aankh lag gayi thi. aarti ne woolen suit pahena hua tha jiske upar se sweater aur fir overcoat ..ek shawl uske kandhe se jhul rahi thi . gulabi patle hoth , ghani palke ,kali ,lambi ghani julfe jiska kuchh ansh uske choti se nikal kar galo ko choom raha tha... surahidar gardan aur unke niche wo everest ki do chotiya ...uff kisi ka bhi iman dol jaye is pari ko dekhkar.
"huh ..aaj bhi utni hi masoomiyat h is chehre par ..uff ye masoom chehre" sahil ke dil me ek tees si ubharti hai.
"didi chai laya hu"
kishor ki aavaz par aarti hadbada kar uth jati h aur sahil ko khud ko dekhte pakr halka sa muskura deti h...sahil jaise chori karte pakda gya ho is tarah se nazre jhuka leta h .
aarti darvaza kholti h...
" kishor kuchh khane ko nhi laye ho ,,bahut bhookh lagi h par m bolna bhool gayi "
"laya hu didi, mujhe laga hi tha aap log bhukhe honge "
aur ye kahkar wo puri trolly andar kar deta h jis par dher sari cheeje khane ki rakhi thi .
"thank u kishore "
kishore bas muskura kar rah jaata h aur bahar nikal jata h .
aarti chai bana kar sahil ki or badha deti h aur kuchh snakes bhi .sahil chup chap cup pakad leta h .
thank you"" sahil ke muh se nikal jata h .
"ab itni parayi ho gyi hu m"
" m jhuthe sapne nahi dekhta ..sachchai ka samna karna sikh liya h maine "
sahil itna bolkar wha se uthkar jane lagta h ..aarti uska hath pakad leti h .
"plz jao mat m kuchh nhi bolungi agar tum nahi chate to "
sahil tumne sach ka samna abhi kiya hi kaha h ..wo to maine kiya h jan - aarti apne man me sochati h aur aansu ki do boonde uske galo ko bhigo deti h jinhe wo badi safai se chhupa leti h .